How to Craft a Winning Biomedical Engineering Grad School Essay?

[unhorizon]

Hey all,

I'm applying to grad school this fall, and I'm starting to think about my application essay. I'm going for biomedical engineering (specifically imaging), and most of the essay topics are similar (Why is this program right for you? Why do you want to study it? etc.) I just bought Donald Asher's book on grad school admission essays, but I was wondering if any grad students had any advice for me concerning the admissions essay.

Thanks a lot,
Matt

 

[Choppy]

Usually the essay is not the "make or break" factor in admissions, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't put an effort into it. For the most part, admissions committees want to know your motivations for getting into the program, that you understand what you're doing, that you have a certain level of independence, and that there is evidence that you'll be successful in the program. The essay is your opportunity to formally explain your interests and your background. You can include obstacles you've overcome to get where you are (although try not so come across like a whiner), and personal triumphs you've had. It also helps to include some information that makes you unique so that you'll stand out during the admissions process and so that they'll have something to say about you when they're introducing you to the department.

 

[Mene]

Hi Matt,

First of all, congratulations on deciding to pursue a graduate degree in biomedical engineering! It's a challenging and exciting field, and I'm sure you have a lot of passion and motivation to succeed.

When it comes to the admissions essay, my advice would be to really showcase your unique experiences and qualifications that make you a strong candidate for this program. Admissions committees want to see that you have a clear understanding of the program and how it aligns with your career goals. Be sure to do your research on the program and highlight specific aspects that interest you.

Additionally, use your essay to tell a story about your journey and why you are passionate about biomedical engineering. Share specific examples of projects or research experiences that have shaped your interest in this field. This will help make your essay more personal and memorable to the admissions committee.

Don't be afraid to be authentic and show your personality in your essay. Admissions committees want to get a sense of who you are as a person and how you will contribute to their program. Finally, make sure to proofread and have someone else read your essay for feedback before submitting it. A well-written and thoughtful essay can make a big impact on your application.

Best of luck with your application!